I think we just need a bit of practice on this don't ya think? :P

OK, it's sweet from this kid or from you to make this video but
actually, it's not good.
First you had to introduce about what
you do. You just start with the face.
Then you have too many
pauses in your sentences. The user wants to watch the videos
quick...not like this....ehmm....then...you..........do...
/>Sorry, but that's the real.